THIS IS SO SO GOOD!! the way that you write emotions into scenes is extremely vivid and gripping. i could perfectly picture the way tyler’s memories faded in and out of the present day. the way that you write leaves just enough to the imagination that my brain has so much fun painting in what you’re describing. i could practically feel the warmth and hear the murmur of the restaurant during their first date. i could feel the cold unnerving stillness of the city. this is making my brain buzz like crazy.
and your character writing?? omg. i love it so much. poor tyler he deserves the world :( i’m one chapter in and im already hooked!! i can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. i’m a sucker for a good zombie/apocalypse story, and you are an incredible writer!
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