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  1. Julie5 on Chapter 2 Wed 27 Feb 2019 10:47PM UTC

    The spirit smiled at her, knowingly, “You will found out sooner than you think.” change found to find.

    I'm rooting for you!

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    1. LadyLazzarus on Chapter 2 Wed 27 Feb 2019 10:49PM UTC

      Thanks for catching that! Just changed it now lol

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      1. Julie5 on Chapter 2 Thu 28 Feb 2019 01:44AM UTC

        normally I ignore that stuff its easy to autocorrect in my head and many of our writers speak English as a 2nd language but I saw that you asked for feedback and I spotted this. I am still looking forward to more of your story.

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        1. LadyLazzarus on Chapter 2 Thu 28 Feb 2019 02:20AM UTC

          Thank you! I will be posting new chapters very soon :)

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