Comment on Tempted

  1. VeniceWizard on Chapter 3 Thu 16 Dec 2021 02:54PM UTC

    Tywin is a bit out of character. As far as I know he's not someone who laughs openly. And while he's certainly disappointed in his grandchildren, he would not tolerate such blatant threats against them.
    However I do like Arianna's and her sister's characters. It's also quite enjoyable to read and I think if you got someone to look over the spelling it'd be a truly great story.

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