Comment on The Life of Harry Potter

  1. SLDD on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2024 07:59PM UTC

    I understand if you don’t want to keep reading, but James has no idea that Sirius is in prison, after Reg saved them they went straight to France assuming that Sirius would avenge Peter, they tried to contact them once everything settled down.

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    1. James_McW on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2024 08:27PM UTC

      It sounds like you are forcing sirius to be in jail for "reasons"

      The Potters adopted Sirius at age 16 when he ran away from home. He was James' best friend. No way he woudn't have sent off a patronous message that he was alive and to meet him somewhere

      Honestly you have the potential for a good story but only if you fix the Sirius issue which makes no sense and do not force the stations of canon.

      Last Edited Thu 04 Jul 2024 08:28PM UTC

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      1. SLDD on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2024 08:57PM UTC

        It’s not ‘forcing’ anything, I love reading fics that have a rewrite of the POA shack scene and since this is my fanfic I’m putting that in, if you don’t want to read it don’t, but it’s not up to you to complain about what I’m putting in my story.

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        1. James_McW on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2024 09:23PM UTC

          You are forcing "the stations of canon" google it....it is a trope and a bad one

          You do you but you have a glaring nonsensical plot hole that has ruined your story

          I bet you will force Harry going to Hogwarts though everyone thinks him dead, force the same troll incident, force all the stations of canon

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          1. SLDD on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2024 10:25PM UTC

            Everyone likes to read different things, im writing my story based on what I like to read. It is a rewrite so yes I’m making it as close to canon as possible bc that is what I want to do, stop complaining and just don’t read it.

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