I love everything about this. The introduction. The style. Your words, all of them,
“The memories were within her, but they were like fish deep in water, darting away the moment she reached for them.” ! such an great description
Aragorn POV!!! Oh this is just so so good. You hit his voice so well. All the little things, the hunter knowledge, the “He knew the folly of chasing what needed to choose stillness on its own terms… deer, dove, or something far more precious. This was no mere wild creature to be gentled.” I am screaming.
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LordAromantic on Chapter 1 Fri 01 Aug 2025 05:56PM UTC
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Venla_Rosler on Chapter 1 Fri 01 Aug 2025 06:10PM UTC
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