Fractures: Sundered Spirits

With the arrival of Princess Azula, Toph Beifong, and Master Piandao to the Fire Nation, Fire Lord Zuko, barely staying afloat as is, finds himself thrown directly into the very thing he's been avoiding: the fallout of the Hundred-Year War. As faces old and new emerge from the shadows, some friend and other foe, Zuko struggles to help both his nation and the world while grappling with exactly what it means to do what is right.
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Books 2 and 3 of Fractures

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Chapter 1: Returned

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- Book Two: To Fall Apart at the Seams -

Zuko had met many nobles in his life. He’d been surrounded by them: generals, admirals, governors, magnates, advisors, and everyone in-between.

Of them all, Toph Beifong might be one of his favorites.

She sat leaned back in her chair, heels crossed on the table, stamped free of dirt only moments before she put them up there. The bottoms of her feet were visible, the soles of her shoes mysteriously missing. She ate her food with her fingers, unafraid to mention when she didn’t like something or when she did. She had a piece of hair that seemed to fall over her nose in the exact spot she didn’t want it, brushing it aside no less than twice a minute.

“You know,” Toph said, not totally finished chewing the dumpling she was working on, “This was not what I was expecting when I made this trip.”

Zuko coughed. “No?”

She shook her head. “I mean, I was hoping to not get thrown in a cell—not that it would hold the Greatest Earthbender in the World—maybe get a thank you or two, but this? You guys must’ve really missed her around here. For some reason.”

Tai snorted. “There’s a good chance this would’ve happened either way. Fire Lord Zuko over here seems to have a nasty habit of taking in strays.”

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Toph asked.

“You don’t need to tell her,” Zuko said.

“Oh-” Toph grinned, a bit feral- “Now you definitely do.”

Tai’s lips split into a wide smile of his own. “I met him by breaking into his office with some of my friends who wanted to murder him.”

Zuko buried his face in his hands.

Toph let out a bark of laughter. “What the fuck? Dude, you’re the Fire Lord, why would you keep around a guy you met on a mission to kill you?”

Zuko, face still pressed to his palms, said, “He was nice? Look, I haven’t really been on the receiving end of a lot of niceness for a good while now. Lady Kya says it’s why I latch onto people so easily.”

“Aw, Fire Lord, are you attached?” Tai asked, turning his smile on Zuko.

“I was,” he replied. “Reconsidering it now.”

“I’m hurt.”

“Yeah, and here I was ready to fast-track our way to being best friends,” Toph added.

“Agni, when are Mai and Ty Lee getting here?” Zuko muttered under his breath. Then, he paused and said, “Actually, they might just make it worse.”

As Tai laughed, Toph spoke. “So, wait, I know who those last two are. Knife Girl and Circus Girl, right?”

Zuko blinked. “Mai and Ty Lee? I… didn’t know you knew them."

“Fought ‘em a good few times.”

“ What? ”

“You’re right, ‘kicked their asses’ might be more appropriate. Anyway-” She waved him off- “Who’s the other person you mentioned, though?”

“Lady Kya?” Zuko asked.

“Yeah,” Toph nodded. “Her name sounds familiar.”

“Uh…”

“The Chief,” Tai said helpfully, and Zuko inclined his head at him.

“That’s right, her husband is the Chief of the Southern Water Tribe.”

Toph jerked so severely she nearly fell out of her chair. “Excuse me, the fuck did you just say?”

Zuko exchanged glances with Tai only to find a matching look of confusion. “Uh, she’s the wife of the Chief of the Southern Water Tribe? I, er, found her in a waterbender prison a while back and now she’s here and has sort of… asserted herself as healer of the house. She’s scary.” A beat. “And nice. Why?”

Instead of really responding, Toph simply chuckled, almost in disbelief. “Oma and Shu, Sokka and Katara are gonna lose their minds.”

Zuko sat up a bit straighter. He recognized those names. “You know Lady Kya’s children?”

Toph furrowed her brow. “Of course I do? Kinda hard not to when you spend months traveling together.”

“Months traveling together? But Chief Hakoda said his children traveled with the Avatar.”

“What are you—” Toph cut herself off, fell quiet for a moment, and then that same wild grin, which seemed to be common with her, blossomed on her face. “ Spirits, did you not know? I’m the Avatar’s earthbending master.”

It was Zuko’s turn to jerk in surprise. He found himself at a bit of a loss for words, which was fine considering Tai seemed to not be.

“Oh, shit, you weren’t kidding when you said you were the Greatest Earthbender in the World,” he said.

“To be fair, almost everyone is lying when they say that about themselves.” She drummed her fingers casually against the armrest. “Almost everyone.”

Anything else that might have been said was cut off by Mai and Ty Lee appearing in the entryway of the room. They stopped there for a moment, seeming to drink in the sight of the table.

Finally, Mai asked in a level voice, “Zuko, care to inform us as to what’s going on?”

At her words, Toph jumped, a hand moving to press against her chest as her feet quickly slid off the table and landed on the floor. “Oma and Shu, warn a girl, why don’t you?”

“Uh, Mai, Ty Lee,” Zuko said, just a bit awkwardly, “This is Toph. She’s—”

“The Avatar’s pet earthbender,” Mai finished. “We’ve met.”

“Hey, if anything he’s my pet Avatar,” Toph said. “And he’s not here, either way.”

Mai raised an eyebrow, Ty Lee hovering over her shoulder. “You expect us to just believe that?”

“Mai,” Zuko said, more softly than he had actually intended, but perhaps that was what drew her attention. “She…She brought Azula back.”

The two girls froze. Ty Lee was the first to speak, her voice trembling a bit as she asked, “Azula? She—She’s home?”

Zuko nodded. “She is.”

There was silence for a long moment, and then Mai took Ty Lee’s hand firmly in hers and said sharply, “Well, we don’t want to see her.” She dragged her friend over to a chair and pushed her into it before sitting down herself.

“That’s… fine,” Zuko said after a moment. “She’s in the medical wing, with Kya and Master Piandao.”

“Master Piandao?” Ty Lee repeated, brow furrowed. “Your old swords teacher?”

“ Swords teacher?” Tai asked, turning to Zuko with slightly-wide eyes. “You know how to use swords?”

Zuko’s face flushed a bit. “I used to,” he said. “I’m a bit out of practice. And, yes, Ty Lee-” He nodded to her- “The very same.”

“Why is he here?” She propped her elbows up on the table, resting her chin on the back of her hand. “Wasn’t he, like, a traitor or something?”

“Double traitor, now,” Toph said. “We didn’t like what the White Lotus was doing, and so here we are. Thanks for not kicking us out, by the way. We’ve definitely got a good thousand-gold bounty by now.”

“Yeah,” Zuko said, just a bit dazed by how nonchalantly she’d said that. “No problem.”

“Have you told the Avatar’s fan-girl her friend is here, yet?” Mai asked, accepting a roll from Ty Lee without looking.

“‘The Avatar’s fan-girl?’” Toph parroted.

“The Kyoshi Warrior,” Mai said.

“Suki!” Ty Lee added.

Toph jerked. “Suki? Suki is here? What the fuck?” She turned to Zuko. “Got any more surprises you’d like to share with the class, Fire Lord? I swear, next you’re gonna say fucking Jet is here or something.”

Tai and Zuko exchanged glances.

She sat up straighter. “No fucking way.”

“I mean, he’s not here now,” Tai said. “You’re talking about Freedom Fighter Jet, right? I know he knew the Avatar and his friends, so I’d assume so.”

“Yeah, ‘Freedom Fighter Jet,’” Toph nodded, her tone a bit hysterical. “The guy who, supposedly, fucking died.”

“Oh, yeah, he didn’t,” Tai waved her off. “Whatever you’re thinking of is probably what gave him his limp, though. He never told me about it, even though he insisted that he got it ‘ fighting the good fight ’ or whatever.” He shrugged. “I just assumed it was against firebenders or something.”

“Evil brainwashing earthbenders, actually,” Toph corrected. “So, wait, he was the one trying to ‘kill the Fire Lord’ that you came here with?”

“He was indeed.”

She snorted. “Yeah, all right. I only knew the guy for, like, four hours max , but he definitely seems the type to almost die and immediately decide his next mission should be to take out a dictator.” She paused, and then angled her head toward Zuko. “Not that you’re a tyrant. Your dad, I mean. He sucked. No offense.”

“None taken,” Zuko said. “He very much did.”

Toph grinned. “See? I knew I liked you.”

“You met me like two hours ago.”

“I’m a very good judge of character.” She popped another dumpling into her mouth, but paused in her chewing halfway-through. Cocking her head to the side, another smile grew on her face, though much warmer than pretty much any of the other ones he’d seen thus far. “Holy shit, is that—”

“Toph?”

Suki stood in the entranceway, jaw dropped, eyes wide. She stared at Toph as if she was scared she’d disappear when she looked away.

Toph vaulted over the armrest of the chair she was in and moved swiftly toward Suki. They were embracing only a moment later, a hold so tight it was like it was the last one they’d ever have.

“Suki, holy shit, it is so good to see you,” Toph said, and then chuckled and added, “Or, well…”

Suki laughed, wiping at her eyes. “Sweet Oma, Toph, you have no idea how happy I am to see you.” She cleared her throat. “Is…Is anyone else here?”

Toph’s shoulders slumped a bit. “Just me. Sorry.”

“Just you?” Suki asked.

“Yeah.” Toph shrugged, but there was tension there that hadn’t been present before. “Went on a bit of a traitor arc, you know how it is.”

Suki furrowed her brow and stepped back, a sharp eye observing Toph carefully. “Traitor? What are you talking about?”

“I…” Toph rocked back on her heels. “... May or may not have gone on the run after breaking Azula out of prison. She’s here now. Sorry.”

“Azula?!” Suki cried, reeling back. “The Fire Nation Princess Azula? Toph, she’s the one who threw me in the Boiling Rock to begin with!”

“That’s why I said sorry!” Toph shot back. “I know she’s done shitty things, okay, but she’s also, like, the same age as Katara, and was objectively doing bad in the dungeons! No one would listen to me, and I wasn’t just gonna—gonna leave her there!”

“You should have,” Suki hissed. “She’d deserve it, after everything she did. She locked up her own friends.” She gestured wildly at Mai and Ty Lee, watching the exchange stoically. “She hurt so many people!”

“You weren’t there!” Toph exclaimed. “You didn’t see her! You can’t feel her. They fucked her up and then they just left her there to rot! How are we supposed to call ourselves the good guys when we treat our enemies the same way they treat us!”

“An eye for an eye,” Suki said, voice low.

“Kyoshi Island,” Toph scoffed. “Always quoting the words of your Lady. You know, Aang talked about how Kyoshi just kept telling him to kill whoever was in the way of balance. Aang.”

The name was spoken with quite a bit of weight, and based on the words surrounding it, Zuko could easily presume that this was the Avatar she was talking about. Aang.

Suki’s lips pressed into a thin line. “Forgive me for having little sympathy for someone like Azula.”

“This isn’t about sympathy,” Toph said. “I don’t even like her. But sorry if it’s a little hard for someone like me to look at her and not help.” Her throat bobbed as she swallowed, hard. “This isn’t just being imprisoned. She lost her bending.”

There was a bang, and Zuko realized a moment later that it was him, the table and chair shaking from the speed with which he stood.

“Azula lost her bending?” He asked, voice hoarse.

Toph was silent. Then, slowly, she nodded.

Zuko’s fingers tangled in his hair, tugging for just a moment until he felt capable of thinking again. “I need to go to the medical wing.”

The journey was a bit of a blur. Zuko left the rest of them behind, mind fully occupied with his sister and her apparent lack of bending. Just how long was she imprisoned? There was no way it could be as long as he had been before he lost his own connection to Agni, but perhaps the requirements were different? He hadn’t yet had a chance to research Elemental Deprivation and its effects, and he bemoaned it now, as he was rather in the dark.

Still, when the door opened to Azula’s room in the medical wing, revealing Kya, Piandao, and his sister on the other side, Zuko knew that he couldn’t just wait to speak with her.

“Hello, your grace,” Kya said, honorifics a bit odd to hear from her but understandable given their current company. “Is there something I can help you with?”

“I’d like to speak with my sister,” he managed to say. She smiled gently at him and nodded.

“Well, my work was about done for the day, anyway,” she said. “I presume you would prefer privacy?”

“Please.”

Kya shuffled out of the room easily, leaving behind just the lightest pat on his shoulder. Piandao followed, remaining as silent as he had since Zuko had entered, but his gaze lingered, as if he wanted to drink in the sight of his former pupil before he left.

The door closed behind them, and Zuko and Azula were alone, for the first time in years.

“Why the wheelchair?” She asked before he could say anything.

“What?”

“You walked earlier.” A small scrap of fabric twirled between her fingers. “Why the wheelchair now?”

“Can’t walk for long,” Zuko replied simply. “I’m working on it. With Lady Kya.”

Azula snorted. “She’s the Water Tribes’ mother, isn’t she?” Zuko didn’t respond, but she spoke as if he had. “Thought so. The resemblance is easy to see. Even a child could.”

She was much more lucid than she had been upon arriving. Zuko probably had Kya to thank for that. She could have that effect on people.

“Master Beifong mentioned you lost your bending.”

It was like a switch had been flipped. Azula’s face, already impossible to read, closed off even more. She scowled at him, eyes flashing. “And I bet you just delighted in that, didn’t you, brother? How does it feel, knowing that you only surpass me when the playing field is tilted so?”

“Azula,” Zuko said, trying to force as much intent into her name as he could. It must have worked a bit, as her head tilted the smallest amount to the side, her frown deepening. “It’s okay. I lost my bending too.”

Her whole body twitched. Then, she fell still, eyes flicking to gaze out the window. A moment later, she murmured, “I didn’t know the Avatar had arrived.”

Zuko’s brow furrowed. “The Avatar? What does he have to do with this?”

Azula’s nose scrunched and she turned to face him. “Don’t be daft, Zuko. You cannot claim to have lost your Fire as I have and in the same breath wonder what that slippery airbender has to do with it.”

“The Avatar isn’t here, Azula,” Zuko said. She observed him with a sharp eye. “And I have lost my bending .”

A few moments passed, and then she said, “You’ve always been a poor liar, Zuzu.”

“I’m not lying,” he said, a flash of annoyance shooting through his heart.

“I never said you were,” she replied curtly. “Tell me, then, how is it that your connection was broken, if not by the Avatar’s hands?”

Oh. Oh. He had wondered how she could have lost her bending in such a small amount of time. It seemed that she hadn’t, at least not in the same way Zuko had. Somehow, the Avatar had snapped her connection himself, something that was far too terrifying to ponder right now.

That meant too, though, that Azula had no idea how Zuko could have lost his own bending. He stared at her for a moment. She was acting how he would expect her to, given their childhoods, but it was a far cry to how she had been hours before. Perhaps this was bravado, more than anything. He didn’t particularly care to find out.

“I’m going to bed,” he said.

“Zuko,” Azula growled. “Answer me. You’re not slick with dodging a question. You never have been.”

“I’m tired, Azula,” he shot back. “And I’m the Fire Lord. If I want to go to bed, that’s what I’m going to do.”

His words silenced her. He wondered if she had even realized that he had been crowned. Was that information she would have been privy to? She wasn’t the person he wanted to ask to find out.

As he wheeled himself toward the door, knocking on it so that Lee would know he was ready to go, he glanced back at his sister one more time. She sat perched on the edge of the medical bed, hair wild and shorter than he’d ever seen it. Dark circles were beneath her eyes, so deep they looked like bruises.

“Your old room is open to you, if you want it,” Zuko said. “It should be just as you left it.”

Her lips pulled down even farther as she glared at him through slitted lids.

“Welcome back, Azula.”

She didn’t reply, but he hadn’t really expected her to, and as he was wheeled out and the door closed behind him, he closed his eyes, dug his nails into the palm of his hand, and focused on the pain rather than the emptiness within his soul where a Fire was meant to burn.

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1. Fanfic_Rater_1_to_5 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:25AM UTC
  
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  2. 1. UniversalOokami on Chapter 1 Tue 30 Jul 2024 01:43AM UTC
      
      I FEEL FEAR!!!!!!!
      
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PechoraFlow on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 04:59AM UTC

Second!
So excited to be continuing this journey with you! I've been following since COVID ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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1. DrearThunder on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Feb 2024 08:26PM UTC
  
  So whats funny is that i was looking for a show to watch and no joke 5 minutes ago I just finished the first episode of Troll Hunters lol
  
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2. 1. PechoraFlow on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Feb 2024 08:41PM UTC
    
    ITS A SIGN. WATCH IT.
    I promise it’s amazing. So well written. The other spin-off series (3Below and Wizards) are fun if you fall in love with the characters, but Trollhunters is genuinely such a well-written show and it stands on its own. One of the few TV shows that absolutely nails the ending - you won’t regret it. :)
    
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  2. 1. DrearThunder on Chapter 1 Thu 29 Feb 2024 02:21AM UTC
      
      I'm really excited for the journey! I finished the second episode and I really like the world building, and I'm so interested to see where the show goes from this point forward. Thanks for letting me know about the spin off - I had no idea there was more!
      
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    2. leaf_o4 on Chapter 1 Thu 29 Feb 2024 12:07PM UTC
      
      ive been considering watching it, and this review has finally pushed me off the fence. thank you, random person who also loves fractures and animated shows
      
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Proper_Prose on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:00AM UTC

I like how every other introduction was a wtf moment. This is going to be good.

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Xpparda on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:00AM UTC

Need more!!!!

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Ilikewaffles on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:01AM UTC

Ahhhhhh I’m so glad you’re back!!!! This is one of my favorite fire lord Zuko avatar books!! I’m excited to see where the second book will take us✨✨

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Cynyx_777 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:03AM UTC

WOOOOOOO!!!!!
ABSOLUTELY HYPED FOR THIS ♡♡♡♡

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erikteviking1112 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:05AM UTC

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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Your_Stepfather on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:09AM UTC

Excited for how this will go

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Boneless_Watermelon on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:09AM UTC

💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚💜💚

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ADGAEA on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:14AM UTC

Kudos aplenty!

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fall_enstardust on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:18AM UTC

I AM HERE FOR THIS!!! I’ve been so excited for this to come out and I can’t wait to read what you have in store!✨

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eggssy on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:22AM UTC

WAAAHHHH SÚPER EXCITED FOR BOOK 2
EXCELLENT CHAPTER ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Belligol_Uchiha_SIUUU on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:24AM UTC

SIIUUUUUUUUUU I LOVE YOU

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Fanfic_Rater_1_to_5 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:25AM UTC

poor azula💔

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Fanfic_Rater_1_to_5 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:27AM UTC

I just stole these from Newgraywolf
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FieldOfGlory on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:28AM UTC

I love Toph. Zuko needs Toph in his life. I hope Zuko and Azula are able to heal and build a more healthy relationship with each other. Thank you for the chapter! I am excited to see what happens next.

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1. Christfangirl42 on Chapter 1 Wed 22 May 2024 03:41AM UTC
  
  Same here!
  
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2. StaroftheBrightSea on Chapter 1 Thu 31 Jul 2025 09:11PM UTC
  
  Toph is SO going to get on the 'bullying the fire lord into getting some sleep' train when she finds out just how messed up his work ethics are. Mostly for the bullying part though
  
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1. Newgraywolf on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 02:52PM UTC
  
  Hey, I don't really care about copy pasting them from me (that's what I do, I have a doc with them already pasted there) but I would say that I try to put fewer hearts for a few reasons, two main ones. One of which is because it can be really annoying on Mobile scrolling through them all, and secondly because it can really lag some computers when scrolling through. Just thought you may want to know, and maybe to edit or remove one of the comments.
  
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2. 1. EvieNyx on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 06:59PM UTC
    
    oh THAT'S why my inbox was lagging, that makes so much more sense. i thought it was something related to my internet or something thank god it's not
    
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  2. Fanfic_Rater_1_to_5 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 09:20PM UTC
    
    got it
    
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Fanfic_Rater_1_to_5 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:29AM UTC

sory not sorry for all the heart spam, that's how excited I am

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1. Overgirl69 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 06:05AM UTC
  
  Cut it out
  
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CuteCats2021 on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:31AM UTC

I love this so much!!! ❤️💕❤️💕❤️💕❤️

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imlovedavepeta on Chapter 1 Mon 26 Feb 2024 05:46AM UTC

IM SO DAMN LUCKY. I’ve JUST gotten into Fractures and now I already get to start book two!! Yay!!! 🎉 I’m so so impressed with the work you’ve put into the story and am SO excited to see it continue! Thank you for such a wonderful read!

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