Actions

Work Header

Rating:
Archive Warning:
Category:
Fandom:
Additional Tags:
Language:
English
Stats:
Published:
2025-11-03
Words:
368
Chapters:
1/1
Hits:
3

Pale crawlers or the grinning pale

Summary:

Has anyone seen or heard of them? Have you ever had an experience with the unnatural?
This is my story — my encounter with something I can’t explain.

Notes:

(See the end of the work for notes.)

Work Text:

I still think about that night sometimes. I was thirteen—maybe fourteen—and my mom and I were staying at a campground in North Idaho while we looked for a place to live. The forest up there is beautiful in the daytime, all green and quiet, a lake about a quarter mile away, but it changes after dark. The trees feel endless, and every sound carries.

That night there was a full moon, bright enough to paint silver across the branches. My mom and I had fought earlier; she was angry because I’d run off to swim and scared her half to death. When we argued, I ended up sleeping outside by the fire. I dragged two camp chairs together and tried to pretend it was comfortable. The air smelled of pine and smoke, and the world was still except for a strange low hum and an occasional screeching sound from the trail.

I couldn’t sleep. Around one in the morning something moved among the trees. At first I thought it was a stray dog. Then I realized it wasn’t walking quite right—too low to the ground, too deliberate. When it came closer, moonlight hit it, and I could see that it was shaped almost like a person but not exactly. Its limbs looked thin, the skin pale enough that I could make out the bones beneath.

It stopped a few feet from me. For a long time neither of us moved. I remember my heartbeat filling my ears, the fire crackling, and how absolutely quiet the forest became. It felt as if time had stretched, but when I finally dared to check my phone again, two hours had passed. Then it made a sound—half hum, half screech—and turned back toward the trail. I didn’t move until sunrise.

I never told anyone back then. I was afraid they’d think I’d dreamed it or imagined it out of fear and exhaustion. But the memory has stayed sharp: the silence, the firelight, the feeling of being watched. Every so often, when I’m alone at night and the house creaks or the lights flicker, I remember those eyes and wonder what really sat by the fire with me.

Notes:

This is written in a journal style from a real memory that’s lingered for years. Whether you read it as a cryptid encounter or as a late-night brush with imagination, it’s one of those stories that never quite leaves you.