It would probably be the highlight of their careers actually lol.
I wasn’t going to ask because i wanted it to be an unpleasant surprise when he showed up later on, like “guess what, dickhead is here” but after re-reading some of the earlier chapters of Ventrexia’s son I’m having a hard time pinpointing kitner. He’s the tabby one right?
The good thing is re-reading those chapters reminded me just how good your story is lol
Yeah. He's a total snot who thinks a whole lot of himself, though he's all hat and no cowboy. Were he braver, he'd be a much bigger bully. He very much resents the fact that his family, while wealthy, isn't wealthy enough for him to live the life of a pampered lordling. Nikos intimidates him because Nikos got into the academy on academic merit, not just because he's a lord.
Put Kitner to work! He needs the exercise (though not as much as Stergar, who has never missed a meal in his life).
Thank you. Right now those two are with Avocato in the solar system doing the diplomacy thing. It’s a position they’re ill suited for but they’re enjoying their leisure more than anything. When Nikos gets there they won’t be so happy to see him as you would imagine. But Nikos and Kedi are going to start picking up the slack in their place once they arrive with Calion.
Avocato will be so happy to have his besties, even if he has to contend with Calion being a teenager. I hope Avocato lets the powers that be know that now he has people who aren't allergic to work, he'll be able to get things done.
He’ll most certainly be in better hands with them. His only hurdle after that would be dealing with Calion, who wants to be a kid but also wants people to know he’s in charge (a little side effect of his earlier power trip) It would pain Avocato to see his cousin acting like Kitner, while Kitner would do his best to encourage the prince’s behavior. I feel a conflict of interest brewing lol.
Well, if Calion wants to be a jerk who only another jerk could like, Kitner's a great role model! he'd love nothing more than to cozy up to the next king and leech off him forever. I can just see Avocato telling Calion he must really enjoy being used because he's letting so many people do it to him.
Calion has a long humble road ahead of him. He needs to learn a lot about life and that everyone who’s nice to you doesn’t necessarily have your best interest at heart. I feel bad that he’s going to be kidnapped later but it’s something that will help himself along that path of maturity and understanding. It’s when he thinks about what he could lose that he’ll truly understand.
I should probably focus on writing the story instead of telling outright the things that are coming lol. That’s my bad.
Oh, I spill the beans on myself like that all the time. It's fun and sometimes helps builds on ideas!
Calion has to figure out that he can make changes and he can make a difference, but the best way to do that is by learning to lead. yeah the music and art are fun and definitely have their time and place, but he have to rearrange his priorities. Getting kidnapped will probably be the best thing that ever happened to him and Ventrexia, because if nothing else, he'll learn who actually cares about him and not what he can do for them.
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