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  1. Ooooh. Harry getting to be the competent one at something because 1) it's Severus who needs the help with it and 2) muggle thing, very good. Harry being secure enough in the situation to tease him a bit, yet also being aware of Sev's discomfort with the situation (sitting around and being cared for by others, especially Harry): better. The role swap from the previous two chapters where it's Severus experiencing the contrast of genuine care coming from a source he's used to being guarded around: best.

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    1. Thanks!! I'm really enjoying doing disconnected scenes that let me play around with different Snape helps/saves/adopts Harry scenarios. Harry is quite a bit older in this scene than the first one, and in this version, I imagine they've been together for a while, so they've gotten comfortable with one another.

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