Aah, i loved this chapter so much!! The different ways grief appears and is handled are so, so nice!
And of course => “You have,” Dave rasps in a way that sends a jolt down Hal's spine. “Really nice eyes. You know that?” (i read this line three times to make sure i was reading correctly. It's just so sweet! And then, how Snake immediately changes subject? Amazing, 10/10)
i like to think that snake has a way with words that makes him sound careless but are actually really well planned so he can compliment otacon all he likes lol. Thanks for reading and commenting! :]
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Merloin on Chapter 3 Mon 27 Oct 2025 09:40AM UTC
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