So, I snuck back to Chapter 11 and very sneakily edited a few lines (is that illegal?!).
And if we agree that Luna is a pureblood, just not part of the sacred 28, we get to keep her in the mix. :D
Actually, you catching this gave me a fab idea about a certain someone down the line, so thank you, thank you, thank you! <3
I had totally forgotten about Neville and Luna, so that makes me feel better about the count.
You are totally allowed to go back and make changes to help things flow better, especially for future events. You just may want to make a note that you did it for those who have already read the chapter.
Luna is totally Pureblood, so she is good there.
It makes me happy that I was able to inspire something! I look forward to seeing it appear in the story.
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Inkddreams on Chapter 12 Wed 29 Oct 2025 06:33PM UTC
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