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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Wed 16 Aug 2017 07:09PM UTC

    Aww, I love Jolder and Saladin in this. Their interactions are a delight and I like Saladin’s perspective on her a lot, especially in the part where he’s watching her run down the hill. That death scene was - I almost said a gut-punch, but that seems a little too on the nose. It was powerful. Can’t wait to see more!

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    1. Littleshebear on Chapter 1 Sun 27 Aug 2017 09:54PM UTC

      Thanks so much! Saladin and Jolder are just eating my brain lately, I don't know how it happened.

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