Comment on Fortunate Son

  1. evil_Jy (eviljy) Thu 11 Nov 2010 06:02AM UTC

    Gah, I'm trying, I'm trying really hard on writing a comment that does this story justice but I'm failing miserably.

    Just... I love every single word of it, I'm actually sad that I reached its end (even though - like for florahart - it means I can finally lie down and try to ease my headache). Not that the end is lacking in any sense. It's just that I could have kept reading indefinitely because I enjoyed it that much.

    Maybe the best praise I can give at this time is to say: if this were a book I'd have gladly paid money for the chance to read it. It's amazingly well written, every single character feels real and important to the story. It didn't feel cliched even once, neither too much drama nor too less - the consequences neither blown out of proportion nor ignored. No instant and easy solution but still a happy ending. Perfect.

    Thank you for writing and sharing this.

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    1. mardia Tue 23 Nov 2010 03:06AM UTC

      uhura going "pssh"

      I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Seriously, that is such a huge compliment, and I'm glad that the story worked so well for you. Thank you again for the awesome feedback.

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