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  1. Tais Suyama (Guest) on Chapter 12 Sat 25 Aug 2012 01:38AM UTC

    I agree entirely with Peacewish. The change was drastic, but so fit! I must confess I got frustrated with the way things went in the first version. By the way, I was absolutely anxious for the next Domestication chapter, since JazzxWave chapters were the ones to grab my attention to this fantastic series. But now that I've become addicted to it and have already read all chapters, I'm no longer sure if I'm desperately anxious for more Surrender, Schism or Domestication chapters...... Oh! And what was that Interlude with Perceptor??!! I need more of that, too! Kookaburra.... you're cruel!! Hahaha! Just kidding! I mean, you're great! A great writer. You really know how to build up suspense! In my opinion, your stories have a very valuable virtue: they're NOT obvious, readers remain clueless about what you're intending to do, i. e., you have us on your hands! You play with our minds, our desires, your writing is mature, and this is rare. Congratulations!! And please, please, please, for Primus sake: keep up your good work, okay? Many kisses!!!

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