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  1. fictionalguysarethebest on Chapter 2 Tue 22 Jul 2014 11:34PM UTC

    I had butterflies in my stomach during the last scene!! :D :D I'm so fucking happy right now you have no idea! *delighted shrieking* I loved it. I loved the way they started talking and I loved the way it progressed (which was pretty realistic considering this is a fanfic. Most people rush through this part so I'm glad you didn't) and I loved the way the chapter ended and I'm grinning like an idiot. Thanks to you.

    Last Edited Tue 22 Jul 2014 11:35PM UTC

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    1. GhostGarrison on Chapter 2 Wed 23 Jul 2014 01:47PM UTC

      I'm very glad to hear that you liked it. :) And I agree with the rushing part, people generally rush through my favorite parts of fics (meeting, getting to know each other, all the "boring" parts) and I wanted to write it /all./

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