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  1. Adventures_in_Writing on Chapter 3 Wed 17 Sep 2014 12:16PM UTC

    God, Tucker made me explode with cute from how worried/nervous/anxious he was.

    I love this. I love how they're actually working on a relationship, how they're taking different things into consideration and talking about it. I find it adds to the realism - in any polyamorous relationship you would imagine that there would be a lot of negotiation. I love the dynamic they already have and can't wait to see how it develops in the next chapter.

    Thank you! :D

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    1. MdeCarabas on Chapter 3 Wed 17 Sep 2014 04:38PM UTC

      I'm glad you said that, because I was specifically trying to go for realism when I wrote this. I didn't want anything to be perfect; I wanted them to bicker and argue and have completely normal misunderstandings and to mess up all the time. And I felt like if something like what they were going for was going to work, it had to be talked about--whether characters wanted to or not. So yeah, basically you picked up on every single thing that was important to me and that I spent a lot of time on and that makes me hella giddy. Thanks for the comment!

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