Bechdel pass in the first chapter, excellent! Great start, the points of view are distinct and well characterized. Can't wait to see the rest of it. And you've probably heard this before, but was the name "Toey" a crack at Toei animations? Because they are dreadful.
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sugarshatter on Chapter 1 Sun 21 Sep 2014 05:15AM UTC
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