I loved this chapter, as usual!! I'm not sure who I feel worse for, Jacques or Olivia! (Probably Olivia, just because she doesn't know that Jacques thinks she's gorgeous and really just wants to make out with her a whole lot except he's too much of a nerd to act on it. Yeah, definitely Olivia.)
I also loved how Olivia related to the kids and how she dotes on Sunny! That's so sweet and you handled it really well!! Can't wait for more!!
Thank you! I'm having so much with this story. Originally I planned out like... 9 chapters... Currently I'm looking at 14 and it might get even more. Their family fluff is just so adorable.
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