Comment on The Chances of Survival: 14 million and the time that never happened

  1. thepuffinpuff (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 12 May 2018 04:12AM UTC

    oh my god I love this. I love this so much you don't even know. After watching infinity war I've been searching through fix-its and time travel stories, and I can honestly say that I've fallen in love with yours. It is only one chapter, and there is a lot to explore with this premise, but I think that you've manage to capture Doctor Strange and Tony's emotions after having traveled through time beautifully. Doctor Strange has experience with time travel so he's not completely hysterical over it yet he has a certain detachness from reality like he can't really believe that he's escaped into the past from Thanos and then he quietly embraces the chance to fix things. But then you have Tony over here who's absolutely loosing it because we all know his sanity is being held together by like two pieces of scotch tape. He can't recognize that he's traveled in time like Stephen can so while we the audience know that Pepper is actually there but there is so much confusion and pain in his mind that he can't tell if he's hallucinating or not. Just the way you've written it offers an in-depth view of their subconciousness and their thought process and I think that this is a really strong point in your writing just to see how the two different perspectives on the same situation compare. I'm very interested in seeing what you have in store for us, I had a lot of fun reading!

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