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  1. Smoakingoddess on Chapter 1 Fri 22 Jun 2018 04:48PM UTC

    Amazing start and awesome timing because Brasil won today. Alisson WAS the perfect casting. Loved this story already.

    ps: It should be "via Brasil". Just thought you should know that is the correct way to say it. Thank you for writing another amazing and addicting story.

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    1. Vixx2pointOh on Chapter 1 Fri 22 Jun 2018 09:11PM UTC

      Im so glad they won today, i was worried i might jinx them haha

      I did know that and I had changed it before editing and posting but um... I must have changed it on an older version because clearly this one was wrong, lol, ive fixed it now ❤❤

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