Oh my god. OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I can't feel anything and yet I feel EVERYTHING. Where do I even begin??? Fuck, you captured Gilbert's thoughts so damn PERFECTLY, even that Bash voice that we all know is in his head!! I am in love with the idea of Gilbert not thinking of his actions ever, just going with his feelings like that damn breech birth hahaha but when it comes to Anne it's like, 'this is right' askfkfkrodnfdjjdfj the hand holding underneath the moonlight? The complete understanding that runs through them? The chemistry that sizzles just through the words you use like, SO RUDE THIS IS SO RUDE. ESPECIALLY WHEN YOU CUT OFF THAT KISS (EVEN IF I WOULDN'T HAVE IT ANY OTHER WAY). Honestly, when they were laying on the hay, I wanted to reach through the screen, smush their faces together and go, "juST KISS!!!!"
Oh my wayward children, and speaking off, THE LITTLE GLIMPSES OF THEIR FUTURE LIKE WHO GAVE YO UTHE RIGHT TO MAKE ME FEEL THIS WAY---I WAS CRYING, SO OVERWHELMED.
I love this so much. I LOVE THIS. I can't thank you enough for being brave enough to put this out here for us to enjoy and what a joy this and YOU are. Just. Thank you so much. Lucy and Anne would be proud. ❤❤❤❤
Thank you so much. I actually teared up at that last line!
It surprises me more than anyone that I tend to fall back on Gilbert's thoughts in my stories, more so than Anne's! I'm a 36 year old mother of 3; it seems so weird to feel a deeper understanding for the way this teenage boy's mind works than Anne's! But I'm not gonna fight it ;)
But yes, I often think really deeply about other people's thoughts and underlying motivations for what they do, but when it comes to myself it's just kind of like... "I wanted to?" LOL
HA, idk about other people but this too is SO DAMN RELATABLE TO ME and most definitely applies to Gilbert like, wants to travel the world? GO. Receives letter from Anne? COMES BACK HOME. Sees a pregnant lady in labor with a breech baby? YA DAMN RIGHT HE'LL BE A DOCTOR hahaha
Nor should you fight it! :D Gilbert may be a teenage boy but he's been through more than any kid should have and so has Anne, which I think you portrayed masterfully, while at the same time, the innocence is still there--the curiosity and the wonder and so much love.
I really fell in love with how concerned Gilbert was in how he didn't want to shame her cause he KNEW she would receive the worst of it if rumor ever spread. And OF COURSE ANNE WANTED TO WALK HIM BACK but again, that selflessness omfg I'm giving myself feels again THEY'RE SO SOFT ASKDKFGHKHLLFJ!!!
I mean every word, they really would be proud ❤ You're so welcome ❤
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