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  1. Lindsey Ochrzcin (Guest) on Chapter 2 Wed 22 Aug 2018 02:47PM UTC

    Okay, so I have read the first two chapters, and I am really intrigued by this story. First of all, when I saw the tags, I knew I had to check this one out. I just love the Corqi pairing, I don't know why, I just do. Second of all, Loqi is one of my most favorite characters in the game (which is weird because he only had like an hour of air time in the whole game), so I like reading stories where he is given some kind of past or family history; I just like seeing characters with depth. My favorite part was his two youngest siblings. Frey and Nanna are just the most adorable little children in the world. I don't know what is going to happen, but I hope Loqi can save his youngest siblings; the Scourge can kill the rest of his family, especially his mother and older sister. Anyway, great start, and I look forward to more.

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    1. Moon_Raccoon_exe on Chapter 2 Wed 22 Aug 2018 08:49PM UTC

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      YOUR COMMENT IS A TREASURE TO ME, I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT.

      Hnhhnngfnhfggh- seriously, thank you so much for this wonderful comment!! I was expecting to not receive any feedback, and I think the beginning is slow (most fics start straight away with the two protagonists of the ship), so I was fully aware that it was not very captivating.

      That's why I'm so grateful to you and so encouraged by your comment; not only was I not expecting any comments, I never expected to receive such a thoughtful and nice one!

      I'm so happy that you decided to give this fic a chance, thank you so much for it. :)
      Hahaha, I get that about Loqi being one of your faves despite the lack of screen time he had!! And I absolutely understand you about liking stories where he's given more story; I'm sad he didn't get more screen time, but that also gives us the chance to give him any sort of story that we want.

      His family as I described it here was in my head for many, many months, but only now got to share it somehow. I'm happy that you're enjoying of the story and family I've given to Loqi, it really means a lot to me that you think so nicely about it :)

      The two youngest are a treasure to write! They're fun and innocence, and I like the bond they have with Loqi, because it's only with them that I get to write a happy, lighthearted Loqi. I'm happy you're enjoying it too!! <3

      YEH, his mom and sister are CRAZY and deserve some smack in the face!! >:(

      Haha, but seriously. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. It gave me so much confidence about how maybe it's really worth it to write this despite how long it may get in a future. I'm so happy it's got a few readers, and that you left this wonderful comment :)

      Thank you so much!! I hope you continue enjoying the story <3

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