Oh wow this story is very interesting. I am curious to see what you plan on doing with the future interactions between Tenenbaum and the Big Sister. The girl seems to behave like both a wild animal and a small child, and I can't help but have compassion for her. I wonder her story is...and what will Tenenbaum do about her presence??? Well done!
It makes me happy to hear I've got you invested! I'm glad the Big Sister comes across as both an innocent and a savage- I wanted to highlight how she's essentially still a child, mentally speaking, but also make it clear she's a battle-hardened weapon as well. And don't worry, it will all work out in the end :)
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