Comment on The Case of the Green Gown

  1. splix on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Nov 2014 06:34AM UTC

    I thought the image of Mycroft in a tux was nice.

    John and Mary only have one child. Everything will be explained in due course, I hope to your satisfaction. :D Thank you so much for reading!

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    1. Book7BrokeMyBrain on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Nov 2014 06:55AM UTC

      *headdesk* Ha. I wondered where Eleanor went to. Time for bed, I think, if I didn't catch that.
      Actually, the fact that they only have one child makes me feel marginally better for Sherlock. I don't know the details of this world yet, but if I was in love with a man who was raising a child who was possibly not his, if John had had another child with Mary, it would have felt like a betrayal, like he was really committed to her, not just shamming for some justifiable reason, or whatever lies Sherlock is telling himself to make it all bearable. Oh, all kinds of jealous thoughts are flitting through my brain for Sherlock right now.
      I'm happy to entertain whatever situation you have cooked up here and go with it. More!

      PS - I meant to say how much I love the voices, particularly John and Mary. You've got the snarky teasing thing down. I love the shrivelly satsuma comment.

      Last Edited Sun 23 Nov 2014 07:25AM UTC

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      1. splix on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Nov 2014 10:37PM UTC

        Aw, I know, poor Sherlock's out in the cold, isn't he? Ten years is a long time to sham, though. That's all I'll say - there's much more to come! I'm so glad you liked the voices. I had a lot more fun than I thought I would writing John and Mary together. :)

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    3. Shezan on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Nov 2014 04:43PM UTC

      Mycroft in black tie sounds divine. Both Holmes brothers are pretty fit.

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      1. splix on Chapter 1 Sun 23 Nov 2014 10:33PM UTC

        Oh, most decidedly! Yum.

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