Gah feeling so many feelings right now. I've really loved reading this fic. The time travel thing usually isn't my deal, but I took the chance and I am so glad that I did. I think you have a real talent for mystery and building suspense and that the plot of this story was so interesting and unusual. If you are ever looking for a beta reader, you should send me a message. My tumblr is nearly the same as here, the-bees-elbows.tumblr.com (just hyphens instead of underscores). I don't do a lot of beta reading, but I actually studied creative writing in college if you can believe that... But I think you have a TON of potential as a really fantastic writer and I would love love to talk about future fics with you! :)
But back to this story. I thought this was a really great ending. Just open ended enough without being too frustrating. And from your note, I think this was the best of the options that you were toying with. I just about died when Yuri says that there was "no room for indecisiveness in his life." If only he had figured that out like 10 chapters ago!! It all would have been so much easier for everyone involved. But despite how infuriating this story was at every turn, I was always waiting so eagerly for the next chapter every Sunday. Honestly, I am really going to miss reading it every week. You did an awesome job, I am really looking forward to reading whatever you decide to write next! (My name is Claire btw, and I'm serious about the beta thing. No pressure, but shoot me a message if you are interested) :D
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