Ash (Guest)
on Chapter 1
Mon 31
Dec 201806:48PM UTC
I LOVE this!!!!!! Thank you, so much for writing this fic! I love little Izuku and I love how you characterized his courage and determination to be a hero! And I enjoy how you made Inko supportive of Izuku, I've read too many fic's where she doesn't support him all that much so its really nice to read a fic where she ends up being supported of him in the beginning of his journey to become a hero. Also the ending this chapter was great! I love the word change of 'want' to 'will be',it really brings out story and Izuku's future potential! THANK YOU!
Thanks so much for the positive comments, and for reading! And yeah, Inko will likely end up being a bit... complicated. She's supportive in the way that she won't try to stop Izuku from being a hero or anything because she wants him to be happy, but that doesn't mean she won't worry - because she knows he has a setback. I think it's about striking that balance, so it's kind of realistic parenting. In BNHA, she tends to worry even though Izuku has literally the most powerful quirk (although he breaks his bones too, to be fair), so she's kinda worried here too - that's just how she is.
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