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  1. charizardfreak on Chapter 1 Thu 03 Jan 2019 01:55PM UTC

    I think I'm going to love this one.

    Hunk is my hero right now. I feel like I'm going to to be practically begging him to save Lance by the end of this; I was already starting to at the beginning of the chapter. It was a relief to see that Pidge noticed something was up too. And I love that line where Lance was uncomfortable with Lotor touching Pidge. It was a nice little touch and I live for protective Lance.

    The part with the collar made me physically ill. I personally HATE tight necklaces, so that just made all the hair on the back of my neck stand up. And the implications of why Lotor chose it in the first place had me hissing insults at him under my breath.

    All of your of your scenes with Lotor and Allura are reminding me of how I felt watching them together on the show after finding out what Lotor had done to the Alteans. Just a lot of internal screaming, on my part.

    I've been excited to read this ever since you mentioned a possibility a part three, and I can't wait to see the rest. <3

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    1. IcyPanther on Chapter 1 Fri 04 Jan 2019 05:55AM UTC

      Awww ♥ I hope you do!
      Hunk is my hero too. Sweet cinnamon roll suspects something is up (he's gotten the most cues at this point too and he's naturally nosy so...) and y'all know me with my platonic Hance. Something's gotta give :D
      Adn ugghh, I hate tight necklaces too. I just really love the concept of a collar though and all it represents; the others don't see it because it was given as a gift, as a necklace, but Lance knows and Lotor knows. Hisssss.
      Lots of internal screaming on this end too regarding Allura and Lotor. But... maybe I can fix that by the end ;)
      Thank you for such a lovely comment hun. This gave me all the warm fuzzies ♥

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    2. Eclipsewriting on Chapter 1 Sun 08 Oct 2023 03:59AM UTC

      Hunk is my hero right now. I feel like I'm going to to be practically begging him to save Lance by the end of this;

       

      Hunk is a legend for physically pulling lance away from Lotor subtlety and then building lance up as the Red paladin

      They had Lotor big mad

       

      Which is why he probably decided to do that bit with the collar

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