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  1. ForeverYoungLadyAnne on Chapter 1 Sun 27 Jan 2019 01:39PM UTC

    As you posted, in a rather short period of time, several new chapters to update "Caretaker", I suppose you have the intention to complete and finish this story soon; so I gave in to the desire to read it, which I already had for a long time, but that I had restrained myself, fearing never to know the end of it.

    I enjoyed the first chapter very much, it's original and very intriguing.

    "In velvety darkness her scaly blue skin glowed, a thin rim of gold around each scale." That's beautiful!
    It's a good idea to make her blue/gold rather than green/gold; the blue colour is well known to be related to Belle's character; besides, that makes me think at the beautiful Na'vis...

    I'm eager to know what is coming next, so I'm going to pursue my reading! :)

    (I would be so glad if you could also do some updates to "A Cricket In Times Square"... and maybe complete it? I love that fic, it's so talentfully imagined, and suspensefully written, by you!)

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