It's very obvious that English is not your primary language. Yes, there are mistakes with grammar and strange phrasing. However, I am able to understand what you are trying to convey. The atmosphere and tone is clear despite your not having a fully nuanced grasp on the entire language. So keep going. Don't give up. Many native English speakers are unable to write well enough to do this.
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Kaiannanthi on Chapter 2 Tue 05 Feb 2019 12:21PM UTC
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