Comment on please could you be tender

1. sondrex76 on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Mar 2019 02:16PM UTC

   

   Nice fanfic.
   Was it something major Adora did here to split them apart or were it just something minor Catra took offense from? Catra in canon have some rather good reasons for acting the way she did.

   ", and she even though she thinks" may be better as ", and even though she thinks" and "up as knight for" could be "up as a knight for"

   Thanks for writing and have a nice day.

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2. 1. erce3 on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Mar 2019 03:11PM UTC

      

      thanks so much! i’m absolutely terrible with typos! also, you’ll see in chapter two!

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