This is so lovely! I think u characterised them all really well, jonas especially, obviously. I also think its a Great idea to write about their more inner, mental problems, its extremely interesting and makes the characters even more human and tangible. I smiled a lot while reading, its so soft and nice and just,,,a hymn to friendship. I love how u included david and how intimate jonas seems with hanna and matteo, i look forward to the other character studies!!
thanks so much!!! i am glad that i nailed the characters and dynamics and yes i always love exploring and reading more in depth to characters too <3 I tried for it to be soft and well i am in love with these friendships! i really think david and jonas are bffs now and jonas & matteo, jonas & hanna are just the best! i look forward to writing the others as well
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