Eh, no worries, not like it has any bearing on the quality of writing. Nice job, by the way, I don't really see people capture the voices and format of homestuck accurately.
Aw thank you! I feel I haven't quite gotten their voices though (i feel they swear like 75% more then what im writing). I think it's mostly the cool text thing you can do.
Example:
TEREZI: Y34H! 1 D4B ON 4LL TH3 H4T3RS! >:]
Would terezi ever say that? No. But for a tiny moment there you totally believed she did. (and that causes it to be slightly less fake.)
EDIT: and i forgot about the workskin you need for that to work properly. ok just pretend that terezi line is in teal and at 14x size.
Comment on The Homestuck Afterwo/ards: > Terezi: Reminisce.
RandoMaxo on Chapter 2 Tue 28 May 2019 03:17AM UTC
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StepperOfTheLongEarth on Chapter 2 Tue 28 May 2019 05:22PM UTC
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