Comment on A Dragon's Tail

  1. Blackarrow_bagels1 on Chapter 1 Wed 03 Jul 2019 01:58AM UTC

    OK so I know this is finished already but I'm going to comment ANYWAYS. This was great!!!

    I love history and english troupes (I'm studying it in college) and this is just RIPE with it. The writing style, especially in the beginning? Perfecto, you nailed classical, long-winded, flowery language. That's how old fairy tales are told! And then the sharp tonal change into the real story (which is giving me off-key Hamlet vibes) sounds like Deceit when he finally drops an act and starts explaining his goals. I can't wait to see where this goes next, and I'm glad you wrote this (I'm also glad that it's finished because I hate waiting).

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    1. Acantha_Echo on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Jul 2019 02:05PM UTC

      I love comments! Seeing them on a first chapter and knowing the journey you are about to make, its awesome.

      Thank you so much! That was exactly what I was aiming for, that ye olde style, so its really awesome to know its something you can pick up on!

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