@Adora and Catra Just kiss and make up already! Really liking the slowburn between the two. Not as much errors as before. A couple of repetive lines and some details that can honestly be taken out. Other than that seeing lots of improvements!
As for the healing sword thing. Well you can just make it that Adora really still can't control the healing aspect of the sword or something like that still. Either that or next chapter they can attempt it with Catra being all "that a sword. Sword is for stabbing. Not healing. What the fuck, adora?"
Thanks for writing! Really enjoyed reading this chapter!
Huh, mostly I can't stand slowburn when I'm reading someone's fanfics, but somehow while writting it just... happend I guess ':D.
It will take some time for them to figure out their feelings for each other, but eventually they will understand.
I love this sentence 'Sword if for stabbing. Not healing. wtf adora?' - that's hilarious!
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RandomRangerWhite on Chapter 4 Tue 16 Jul 2019 07:59PM UTC
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