Oh, this is really beautiful! I especially liked the part about feeling like you might fall up into the night sky; I've felt that disorienting feeling before when looking up at the stars, and I've never seen it described quite so well.
Thank you. This was such a step away from what I normally write that I'm amazed by all of the positive response it's gotten. You're not the first person to mention that particular line and I'm surprised that feeling seems to be such a common one - as I was writing it I was wondering if I was the only person who'd ever felt that way and it's so neat to discover that I'm not.
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