Comment on hearing damage

  1. coveredinthecolors Thu 30 Apr 2020 03:37AM UTC

    Holy fucking shit.

    I'm in awe. I'm jealous of you writing skills. I'm... I don't know what I am. But I know it's hard to english right now and this story was so good it makes me want to yell at you in my first language. I won't, as I need you to understand exactly how much I loved this. AND I LOVED THIS SO, SO VERY MUCH. IT WAS SO GORGEOUS AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND THERE WERE LINES THAT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY AND HAD ME STOPPING AND LOOKING AWAY FOR A FEW SECONDS SO THAT I COULD GATHER MYSELF.

    This was SO creative. The idea of fight club. That Klaus did that first to find a second of relief from his Caroline thoughts and then just so that he would be able to touch her whatever way he could, whatever way she'd let him. And I'll be the first one to say that I hate fight scenes with everything that I am, but these were so well written and there was so much intimacy between Klaus and Caroline that I couldn't help but love every second of them.

    And also... your Klaus was so in character! I love how jealous he was of Tyler, how he admits it freely. His lines are so on point. Him making fun of Caroline's use of newer expressions. The way he is always so intense in his interactions with her... AMAZING.

    Don't ever apologize for writing a lot of words. I loved every single sentence and every paragraph and absolutely everything about this story from start to finish. It was an incredible universe, with incredible writing. Thank you SO MUCH for turning my silly prompt into this. You are very talented.

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    1. but_seriously Thu 30 Apr 2020 04:57AM UTC

      urgh, THANK YOU for this comment. i have to admit that writing this i wasn't feeling very confident. i felt out of my element and wasn't sure what was happening to my english (english is also my second language, and sometimes there are just expressions in your mother tongue that can't be found) i was thinking COME ON HANNAH YOU KNOW MORE WORDS THAN THIS. unfortunately in that moment my brain didn't want to cooperate.

      so getting this review was really lovely for me, because it reminded me that sometimes, even when i feel like crap, i just have to get off my ass and WRITE something. even if i think it's whack. anyway, i'm waxing poetic now cos you flatter me so. also, i too hate writing fighting scenes cos i can never write it how i imagined in my head? it's a bit like... okay, his legs were here and his fist was there... where's his fist again??

      thank you so much, i really enjoyed your prompt.

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