I am dying. I want to hit Jen over the head just a little because she really is such an asshole here. And dear god, the whiplash I got going from Jen to Dear Friend was just awesome. The switch was so abrupt, it made my head hurt a little, but you also sold the difference very well too!
I'm also trying to guess who's going to discover the secret first. Jen will be horrified and the making amends bit is going to be fun. But Judy's self-esteem issues might make her want to keep the secret just a bit longer because she wants to keep Jen but thinks that Jen doesn't actually like the real her...
Either way, it's going to be interesting and fun. I'm really looking forward to how you'll develop these characters and their relationship with each other!!!
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DopeyTheDwarf on Chapter 2 Mon 08 Jun 2020 02:50PM UTC
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