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  1. heya! i'm here re-reading this bc it's one of my faves nomin and i needed some cheering up and inspo! and god did it work!!

    what i love the most it's how natural you write jeno and jaemin, as individuals and especially around each other <3

    like this for example:

    Jeno swallows. “Do you always get into cars with strangers?”
    ”Do you always allow strangers into your car?” the stranger cheekily replies, as he straps himself onto the passenger seat, looking more than comfortable in Jeno's red hoodie.
    "Fair point."

    GSJDHD I LAUGHED

    ALSO renjun and donghyuck <3 i loved them sm here TT and all their interactions with jeno. there's different details that you manage to capture very well about the characters, like the fact that mark prays:

    “What he means is that ramyun is usually code for ‘Wanna go back to my place and fuck?’,” Renjun supplies.
    The memory of Jaemin’s kiss rings clear and instantly, Jeno feels his face warm up.
    “Guess I’ll keep on asking Mark to pray for your sex life,” Donghyuck announces with a sigh.

    hdhdjd also, you're just really funny.
    i loved this and i can't wait to re read the other chapters <3

    Last Edited Mon 08 Jun 2020 07:19PM UTC

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