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  1. haku23 Mon 13 Jul 2015 01:26AM UTC

    I liked this a lot-you really know how to set a scene and the seduction was of course super hot ;D! You've got a really great grasp on both characters, awesome job!!

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    1. AkihiroHowlett (SongOfTheAngel) Mon 13 Jul 2015 01:59AM UTC

      #supersquees Okay. Sooooo I may have had a mild heart-attack when I saw you'd commented on this lol. (Iwasactuallylowkeysupernervous) Soooo I'm REALLY glad you liked it. Your works (along with the comics and my own sort of like character analysis) REALLY helped with my own characterization for these two in painting their dynamic and mannerisms. So yeah it kinda means a lot to me that you enjoyed it! *bows to the King of Daken/Johnny* *Fanself* Thanks! The seduction/banter was REALLY fun to right. *Cries* I'd wanted them to fuck. I really REALLY REALLLLLLY wanted them too. Sadly Daken's a bitch and true to Machiavellian Villain form does what he wants. And you know stared at me without any clothes on and said "Write it like this" -.- I'm just along for the ride .

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      1. haku23 Tue 14 Jul 2015 12:18AM UTC

        Hahahaha oh man, I'm not worth getting nervous over at all! :'D That's such a compliment, though, I'm happy I could in some way help you :>. Lol seduction banter is always the funnest part to write for me too but I definitely understand that as well...Too many times have I been writing and thinking "ah this is how it will go" and then nope. Great job again!!

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        1. AkihiroHowlett (SongOfTheAngel) Tue 14 Jul 2015 01:01PM UTC

          Lol well with a fandom as (sadly) small as this you do notice who it is that's been writing most of the fics u enjoy. So yeah that's most of the reason behind that.

          Yaaaass deduction banter is to diiiiie for, its great when u can work in a ton of double meaning.

          *sigh* *bows head* we are in this together. I swear the only plot bunny Daken let me keep was Johnny's secret biting kink. Idk y. I just feel like he'd have one. Screw you (yes please) Daken.

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          1. haku23 Tue 14 Jul 2015 11:16PM UTC

            I'm glad that you enjoy my writing :') <3

            But yeah oh my god hahaha when stuff has a double meaning, or you're like hmm not sure if serious...that's my favourite. Characters inadvertently giving away their secrets is my jam.

            Yes!!!! I'm happy to be in such good company! But oh my god hahahaha he prob. would though, because he knows that he's not really supposed to get TOO marked up because press but that just makes it more exciting lmao.

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