The premise is super interesting so far. I really like the characterization of Shamir and Catherine. Shamir's always so curt and straight to the point :D I had to snort when they discovered they can use those lights to blind people alkrjmjtvlkw i'm looking forward to the world building, esp with Duscur being based of South Asia which is such a cool idea! Can't wait for Dedue and the Blue Lions to appear. Also very curious about the interaction between the church and Parvati with the whole stuff surrounding Agarthan tech!
Wow, thank you for such an in depth comment, @Minglan!!!
You won't have to wait too long for the Blue Lions to start showing up. :D I think just 'til Sunday. XD
I'm in the middle of revising this story and am *still* discovering ways to take the Parvati-Church dynamic up a notch. Glad to hear that it strikes your interest!
Dedue is going to become something great. This one does not stay forever in the shadow of the Lion, and I look forward to unveiling this man, slowly but surely.
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