xD that's not true, no one is ever late for the party~ You're just in time!
(are you okay with so much coughing? haha) Yeah... She isn't so confused at first bc she doesn't know at all what's happening. But really, if I was her and saw a very crazy look on Steven while he is acting like he is desperate to approach her after all the things she did... I think I would be more scared than confused! In the second one she was confused but not scared because Steven didn't act like he was crazy and trying to harm her (despite this not being the case either in the first one, but still) In fact, in the second one Steven wasn't responding for quite sometime before Spinel scares him, poor boy xD He was just acting weird... And in the third one she was calm bc Steven was calm too, being more gentle, without looking at her that way... I needed comfort in the end for both of them. This two had a very bad experience in the second one (Steven remembers, Spinel doesn’t, but that doesn't mean she isn't scared of that happening again)
Sorry for explaining this unnecessarily :'3 And I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3 (I'll try not to do too many stories with death... I know it's uncomfortable for some people) and thanks for your comment! I really appreciate it! <3
Wowie, your joke darkened my sight. Like, I've never thought about it that way XD Thanks for explaining, actually. Was it unnecessarily or not, as we say, 'repeating is the mother of learning', and it helped me to understand everything a little more. Glad to be here! :p And don't limit your creation cuz someone can be uncomfortable. You proved that you can be a friggin fluff dealer writer, and you made sure to warn everybody. Who feels bad goes further, that's totally ok.
You're welcome? I mean, I like when people have or make their own ideas/explanation or theories about my stories, but at the same time I want them to understand mine ^w^' and I was thinking that maybe I shouldn't do that.. But I'm glad this helped you UwU
Aww you're so sweet ;w; Thank you! And I won't ^w^ but I'll make sure to always warn everyone, of course Frigging fluff dealer writer? Hahaha I think I will save that one in my notes xD ;3
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