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  1. starkyd7 on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 01:30PM UTC

    starkyd7

    Oh my God, I checked out that review and laughed so hard my stomach hurt. I think that person (an obvious Stannis fan) was just copying and pasting a random GoT rant there, he didn't even address the fic at all.

    Also laughed at how you were so very careful to make sure readers knew there would be no Girl!Peen in your fic, right in the summary.

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    1. RevanStar on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 01:56PM UTC

      I thought the no girl!Peen was very important information that potential readers should have.

      And ya. its a bit obvious the reviewer didnt really read my story. This is obvious since they said something about Jon and how the title should have been "frostflame" or at least I think thats what they was talking about.. idk.

      Clearly the reviewer assumes that a Stargaryen fic is Jon/Dany. (even though Jon's last name is Snow, and its more or less widely accepted that R+L=J)

      As for it being a random copy-paste of a random rant. Thats painfully clear with
      "If Aegon isn't a real Targaryean Young Griff is qualified to rule" I made no mention of Aegon. And Aegon IS Young Griff. And rather or not hes truely Aegon is questionable.

      Maybe he included that because of Aemon Stark? (Even though I'm pretty sure I had explain that Aemon Stark is Robb's trueborn son, no relation to the three headed dragon)

      idk. the bad english gives me a frightful headache in combination of the lack of sleep I've gotten this weekend. - Also chapter 2 is shaping up to be longer then chapter 1. and not nearly as many characters

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      1. starkyd7 on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 02:38PM UTC

        starkyd7

        I'm sorry that your first FFnet review for Frosted Faith was a troller =/ I have to recommend that you add 'Femslash' into your summary though too - I find that FFnet is a whole different beast than A03 when it comes to 'alternate' writing, and you can bet someone is going to get nasty about 'accidentally' reading your fic without realizing what it really was.
        Some people on there really needed to be tossed from the retarded baby cliff (sorry, I watched 300 again last night...)

        I still can't help but laugh at this guy. Whoever he is, he's clearly off his meds no matter what. I have something to share with you that you should find very soothing - I've had to use it after FFnet 'adventures' before:

        https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=92i5m3tV5XY

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        1. RevanStar on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 02:51PM UTC

          Oh...my....fucking god......... Oh that just made my life so much better XD Thanks for sharing.

          As for marking it femslash, I made sure to clearly mark the pairings in the character selection. If they wanna get butt hurt because oh no, lesbians, well.. consider it justice for all the Dany/Jon, Dany/whoever the fuck, Arya/Gendry, Arya/Aegon, Arya/Jamie, stories that are mislabled

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          1. starkyd7 on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 03:02PM UTC

            starkyd7

            I find I use that special meditation on a near-daily basis...!

            LMAO! I love your indignant rage. Ok, fair enough, you can certainly handle any grief any of them may dish out XD

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            1. RevanStar on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 03:45PM UTC

              yes, yes I can.

              And I totally shared that video with everyone on the book-of-faces.

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            2. RevanStar on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 06:11PM UTC

              Opps. between the two parts. Arya's contribution to Chapter 2 is like 9k words.

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              1. starkyd7 on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 07:12PM UTC

                starkyd7

                WOW!! O_O this is gonna be epic

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                1. RevanStar on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 07:17PM UTC

                  I think I'll just do her and Dany this chapter. Else its going to end up a novel in and of itself. I'm pushing 10k at this point and I'm really just getting started on Dany's section.

                   

                  Also. can I use you as a beta again?

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                  1. starkyd7 on Chapter 1 Tue 25 Aug 2015 07:20PM UTC

                    starkyd7

                    Yes. You can use me as a beta until the day you decide to fire me ;)

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