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  1. staqua on Chapter 4 Sat 20 Feb 2021 11:13PM UTC

    YOU TURNED ME INTO A MELTY PILE OF GOO THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!! I absolutely adore your Shouto POV, his internal monologue is so hilarious to read and you captured it perfectly :') I loved their first meeting, with Shouto's charming first impression (your one-liners are always fantastic jfskdnskn) and then their developing relationship made me smile, especially with the date! The date was so adorable heckk I'm such a sucker for the amusement park thing, where one of them just wins a stuffy and just hands it to the other gwahhhhhhh I melted :D And then the Kirishima story was a pile of oof ;( I hadn't picked up on that mystery himbo line Mina was talking about (at first I thought she was talking about Katsuki and Shouto *facepalm*) but then I realized it was Kirishima and mannn that hits hard... But! Speaking of Mina, I loved the way you wrote her ahh, she is /so/ that quirk romcoms friend and she's just so cool in this fic!! Ugh, everything about this was just really well done dude, like even though it's a soulmate fic, I liked how their relationship still felt so genuine and real beyond the obligation(?) or fate that put them together. Anyways, enough rambling ahh, thank you so so much for sharing this beautiful fic, I absolutely loved it!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

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    1. cunttwatula on Chapter 4 Mon 22 Feb 2021 09:11AM UTC

      I really struggle with Shouto POV so it's always really nice when somebody tells me they like it <3

      I had a whole LIST of places where they could go on a date for that scene and when I originally made it I was going to send them to a botanical garden because of all the colors but I'm happy I went with the amusement park and fireworks.

      Mina doesn't get enough love in fics. I love her and wish she was included as more prominent member of the Bakusquad in fics.

      Thank you so much for commenting!!! I loved all your rambling so don't worry about it!! <3

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