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  1. Anon (Guest) on Chapter 9 Thu 25 Feb 2021 08:34AM UTC

    AHHH. I LOVE this series so much. I love when merlin is a kid and unintentionally reveals that he had a hard life and the knights realize and previste him.
    Where is that fucking moth Freya sent??? I want merlin reunited with his Druid family from cenrids. Where is hunting? Balinor? Is Merlin a dragon lord yet? I love that they all visit kilgarragh (I think that's this fic?)
    I want merlin to reveal more of his hard upbringing but act like it's normal or flinch when Arthur's mad or something so people fucking know what this poor boy has been thru!!! My boy deserves LOVE , COMPASSION AND RESPECT. I want merlin to think the knights are going to use him after they discover his magic and he runs away but to a different cave. (Meet balinor?). Has Merlin been deAged or was he just born later? I love the morguese and cenrid dynamic of mutual hate but working together for a bigger cause. Nimeuth?? In Camelot?? This is interesting. What if it her saw her?? What if merlin is revealed when he stops her. WhT if merlin is Kidnapped by nimeuth?? We don't know (or remember lol) bitches' goals. I love that merlin is experiencing new normal things. I would lofe for him to be more involved in fighting the big baddie tho!! (These are not criticisms, just things I like in a fic.please ignore this).Merlin relying on morgana to keep Camelot safe? Only for her to fail? Merlin has to step up. Then morgna is tempted and (temporarily) evil but Merlin helps her see the light.
    You know what I hate?? In the season 1 finale when merlin poisons morgana, why didn't he just tell her??? I feel like she would've done it!!! Then it's mot a betrayal. Morgana didn't know she was the center of the enchantment. She just thinks her friend poisoned her for no reason and ransomed the cure. I'd be mad too!!!!!
    Communication darling, we love to see it (but jot do in real life lol).
    Anyways. I can't wait to find out what happens next!! I usually don't follow/read WIPs incase the author doesn't want to update anymore or something, but I just might keep an eye out for this one👀. Ily, thank you for you (fanfic) service. You're a lovely writer and I love how you give these relationships depth and purpose rather than brush them off. Love!!!!!

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    1. boredom on Chapter 9 Sat 27 Feb 2021 05:50PM UTC

      Thank you so much. I probably won't update it since it's been so long, but every once in awhile I come back, and I still have all my notes. I might just make a point to finish this fic, though.

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