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  1. HoosierPotter (Guest) on Chapter 3 Sun 27 Sep 2015 03:18AM UTC

    I liked the latest update and the chapters before and think you are doing a great job with this. In regards to the inheritance, many must forget that to accept the crown can be a choice. Aemon Targaryen passed over the title to his brother Aegon the fifth, grandfather to Aerys II Targaryen and great-grandfather to Rhaegar. So it is possible that a similar situation happened here where Aegon agreed to passing the title of heir to Jon not wishing to be King. Besides that I think that the Jon/Arya romance will be interesting and I agree with many who have reviewed in I hope Sansa doesn't get attached to Jon. I don't like infidelity fics but if that is the route you wish to go where Jon goes along with marrying Sansa then they cheat on each other with their respective siblings then so be it, but I would rather that happen before they marry that way it isn't so horrible of both of them. I couldn't see Aegon doing that to his brother or Jon to another for he seems too noble. He seems like the kind that would fall in love with Arya and then call the betrothal off or try and speak with his mother about his feelings and see about getting the betrothal called off. If Aegon falls for Sansa then he needs to tell Jon or that could severely harm their relationship and closeness if Jon felt he was betrayed by Aegon.

    Like I said I have enjoyed your fic and this latest chapter was a bit interesting at the end where Jon was intrigued more by Arya then Sansa. Things should get interesting from here.

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    1. Kurojouou on Chapter 3 Sun 27 Sep 2015 04:09AM UTC

      Thanks for the comment! I'll keep what you've said in mind. Yes, Aegon and Jon love each other too much to betray one another. There will be infidelity in this fic, but it wouldn't harm the boys' relationship, that I can assure you. :)
      Thanks again. Lots of love to you. ♡♡

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