Oh, you did really well getting inside Ezra's head for this, his fear was so visceral. Good job making Vader very intimidating and scary. I was super interested in this from the premise alone but your execution of it is so good! I loved the dynamic you have between Kanan, Ezra, and Maul, even though Kanan and Maul hate each other the fact they bother care about Ezra in their own way is really neat. I love the way looked over Ezra to make sure he was alright. I'm super excited for more, can't wait to see what you have happen next!
Thank you again! Writing the dynamic between the three was probably my favorite part. Since we never got to actually see the fight, I had some fun thinking of where the dynamic would go/change. Ezra and Maul's is relatively the same of course, but Kanan is still heavily suspicious of Maul's intent, (and rightly so!) so I thought I'd have some fun with the dialogue. Thanks for reading!
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