I wasn’t expecting you to actually describe him going through it. Even just the noises made me sick. Poor Carl.... and Siddiq is probably mentally scarred too. Great job tho! I can’t wait to see how the Savior’s Arc changes because of this.
Honestly 'jesus fucking christ' pretty much sums up the whole chapter
Trust me, I felt sick just writing that part. I felt so bad for Carl in that moment (and Siddiq, because cutting someone's arm off CANNOT be a fun experience.)
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