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  1. Why Does A Bird Have A Computer? (Guest) on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 02:14PM UTC

    ....The beautiful spirit at Windrise was Lumine wasn't it? Nice touch 👍

    And yes, Lutsen, Venti is very sus, but you don't even know the half of it yet lol. Anyway, great chapter and can't wait for more :D!

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    1. Hazerater on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 08:07PM UTC

      It was Lumine!!! I tried to make it pretty obvious. He learns about Venti pretty quick. I have that chapter written and it is awful. I think I’m going to rewrite it and have him learn everything way later. What do you think? Leave him in the dark or show him everything super soon? I’m leaning towards leaving him in the dark and rewriting the chapter.

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      1. Why Does A Bird Have A Computer? (Guest) on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 09:43PM UTC

        I would also say leave him in the dark just a little while longer.. Just drop small hints here and there for him to slowly piece together. That's how you write a good mystery ;D

        Plus, revealing it piece by piece will slowly ramp up the excitement and build up for when he finally figures it out. Bigger build up, but payoff.

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        1. Hazerater on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 09:55PM UTC

          Ah true. Very smart. However, I can’t write mystery’s... XD oh well. Venti will stay sus longer!

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          1. Why Does A Bird Have A Computer? (Guest) on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 09:58PM UTC

            Speaking of sus characters, where's Kaeya? Is he just not with the Knights or am I too dense to have noticed him??

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            1. Hazerater on Chapter 8 Mon 17 May 2021 11:22PM UTC

              Nah he’s not here yet. He’ll probably be mentioned in the next few chapters though!

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              1. Why Does A Bird Have A Computer? (Guest) on Chapter 8 Tue 18 May 2021 12:08AM UTC

                Given how much the twins have changed Teyvat, I cant wait to see how this has either changed or effected Kaeya's character (given his ah- *cough* origins). Will his relationship with Diluc be different? Will he be apart of the knights or will he have a different occupation? Will he still wear his eyepatch to hide his heritage? Will his birth father still be alive?? There are so many questions with so many intriguing answers!!

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                1. Hazerater on Chapter 8 Tue 18 May 2021 01:02AM UTC

                  Amazingly, I’ve actually thought about some of that!!!
                  Do you want answers right now? Or would you rather wait for the chapter to come out?

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                  1. Why Does A Bird Have A Computer? (Guest) on Chapter 8 Tue 18 May 2021 02:02AM UTC

                    Hmm... Nah, I can wait, It'll be more fun that way! Besides, you don't want to give away too many spoilers in the comments ;)

                    I honestly can't wait to see what you have planned for him though! So exciting~!!

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