Perhaps you could join some sort of Tumblr or Discord group to find someone to help you? I'm afraid that I wouldn't make a good reader because of some age and cultural differences between us, giving a hint is easier than the work of helping a writer express THEIR voice - not correcting by rewriting it. I can offer to answer a question or so about idioms or smoothing over phrasing without trying to blur your voice. If you'd like, contact me at [email protected] with questions. I go by Jay. Be safe and be well
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ofcomingforthbyday on Chapter 4 Wed 02 Jun 2021 01:53AM UTC
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