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  1. JuneJalow on Chapter 4 Wed 23 Jun 2021 08:19PM UTC

    I wanted to change the usual tension between them for once since most fic's I see have them at odds, having sister's of my own I understand how emotions can shift from being okay with each other to fighting like dogs the next. Just a nice change in pace.

    As for Warden and Capitaõ I understand the view behind your wording. This chapter was rushed but no excuse on my end not to put more 'flare' behind things. It was an idea from a friend of mine who is Army, sprang from him explaining how he's witnessed friends of his get chewed out for not wearing the proper vest or one at all in dangerious area's. So figured they more or less got caught in the wrong place at the wrong time ya know?

    Ah, Kapkan and Frost. I very much approve of that ship, they're really adorable <3

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    1. April 0421 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Thu 24 Jun 2021 11:31AM UTC

      Oh I see. My condolences to your friend's comrades who died in the line of duty.

      When it comes to Ela and Zofia I see their relationship starting as sour as it was described to be but as time goes on I can see the biases they have against each other start to fade and Ela reveals that she cared for her sister all this time but she was just too afraid to show it and Zofia protecting Ela with her life since she still sees her as part of her family whom she cares for above all else.

      I wonder how COD Frost would feel if he meets Siege Frost assuming Tina is still alive somewhere. Insert the Spiderman Imposter meme.

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      1. JuneJalow on Chapter 4 Fri 25 Jun 2021 12:13AM UTC

        He always tells me it's 'part of the job.' They can be really stubborn about it. I'll be sure to tell him though :)

        Honestly that's what I'm aiming for, like right now it's on the fence of them still being tense around each other but leaning more towards being sisters again.

        Ngl I didn't think about them meeting... I might just do that lol I'll credit you for the idea

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        1. April 0421 (Guest) on Chapter 4 Fri 02 Jul 2021 06:34PM UTC

          You're welcome.

          Speaking of Kapkan x Frost. I decided to check in AO3 for any good fanfics about Frost and Kapkan and I eventually found a one shot that has 4000 words. Naturally I decided to check it out wondering what it had. Since there were no archive warnings I didn't know what to expect. Most of the story was fine until the end part. I was absolutely stunned and shocked to the core when I read that ending cause it came out of nowhere. I won't spoil the whole thing so you can read it if you want

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